Hazel and I talked about my main idea—Try
to live peacefully with cats.
Hazel asked me to think why people don’t
like cats? Maybe it has something to do with superstition or ancient legend.
So I look up some information about it.
Many people think cats are negative because they like to hide in dark places. For the
reason, people can’t really know what kinds of lives they lived, and people
always afraid of what they don’t know. That's why people don't like cats.
But the reason why cats like to hide in dark places is because they feel more comfortable in there. If people try to understand them, they will find out that cats are optimistic actually.
My topic statement: What I have found in these cats.
My main idea: We should try to understand these cute but mysterious creautes and be nice to them.
But the reason why cats like to hide in dark places is because they feel more comfortable in there. If people try to understand them, they will find out that cats are optimistic actually.
My topic statement: What I have found in these cats.
My main idea: We should try to understand these cute but mysterious creautes and be nice to them.
The topic and the main idea are still too broad. Come talk to me tomorrow (Fri.).
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