3rd entry

Topic: Living at peace with cats.

Main idea: Why and how we should live peacefully with cats and the advantages of doing that.

Main idea1: why we have to live peacefully with cats.

Topic sentence: why we have to live peacefully with cats because if we try to understand them, we will find the goods in them.

Supporting sentences/examples: 

1. The information I found why people don't like cats.

People don’t like cats because many people think cats are negative because they like to hide in dark places. For the reason, people can’t really know what kinds of lives they lived, and people always afraid of what they don’t know. That's why people don't like cats.

But the reason why cats like to hide in dark places is because they feel more comfortable in there. If people try to understand them, they will find out that cats are optimistic actually.

2. John's story which shows cats can be easily controlled if we treat them we'll and love them.

Only five days, he changed a lot. Just because we let him out all the time and gave him enough food to eat and water to drink. We didn’t do much right? But what we got from him is much more than we did to him. Our feedback was his meek side, and that’s enough for everyone who loves him.

3.Xiao shun death made Da fu sad can show cats are not hard to understand. They are just like human, and they have emotions, too.

He stayed in the bucket all night and didn’t eat anything. Da shun was walking around us. Da fu ‘s behavior made all of the people there felt sorry for him. Even my mom, who hates all the animals can’t help but believe that he was really heartbroken.

Main idea 2: how to live peacefully with cats.

Topic sentence: what you can do and what you can't do to help you live peacefully with cats.

Supporting sentences/example: 

1. Don't  misunderstand them. Take hydrophobia(狂犬病)for example, the cats in the park have already got a vaccine so they are safe. But if you don't know that, you might think they are dirty and mistreat them.

2. Not to chase after them. You might frighten them.

Many kids will chase after the cats or make some noises on purpose to scare them while I am playing with them. And the cats will run away  immediately. I think those kids want to play with the cats too. But they don’t know the appropriate way to get along with them.

3. You can take some toy to play with them(just as the post I post, a little girl played with Da fu)

I think the fastest way to get close to them is to play with them. I saw a little girl and his brother used a toy to play with Da Fu. In the beginning, Da Fu was afraid of them, but he played with them happily in the end.

Main idea 3: what can you learn if you live peacefully with them.

Topic sentence: cats are actually cute, if you treat them well, you can be happier and carefree.

Supporting sentences/example:

1. I go to see them everyday after school. No matter how tired I am, I will be happier and energetic after seeing them.

※The benefit of keeping a cat.(what I  found online.)

1.      Cats can release your stress better than dogs. Some searches indicated that “meow’s ” frequency is more likely to people’s ears.  

2.      Cats are natural alarm clocks. If you don’t wake up on time, your cats won’t let you sleep. And of course you can’t “turn them off.”

3.      You can learn to be diligent because you have to clean up

4.      Research form England indicated that those who keep cats are more clever tanr keep dogs because you don’t have to spend so much time on them.

5.      You can also help the environment! If you keep a cat, you can discharge less greenhouse gas(溫室氣體)than keep a dog.

6.      Cats can help you become more attractive! Research shows that 90 percent of single women think the man who keeps cats is more impressive because they are more sensitive and thoughtful.

7.      Keeping a cat is good for your heart! When you fondle cats, it can help you clam down. Researches indicated that compared with those who keep cats, those who don’t keep cats are more likely to have heart attack.

8.      Cats can help you catch flies, too. If you keep a cat, you don’t have to buy  insecticides.

What Hazel and I talked about

Hazel and I talked about my main idea—Try to live peacefully with cats.

Hazel asked me to think why people don’t like cats? Maybe it has something to do with superstition or ancient legend.

So I look up some information about it.

Many people think cats are negative because they like to hide in dark places. For the reason, people can’t really know what kinds of lives they lived, and people always afraid of what they don’t know. That's why people don't like cats.
But the reason why cats like to hide in dark places is because they feel more comfortable in there. If people try to understand them, they will find out that cats are optimistic actually.

My topic statement: What I have found in these cats.
My main idea: We should try to understand these cute but mysterious creautes and be nice to them.

Some sub-points

Now I am going to add some sub-points.

Why I choose this topic?

Because I love cats.

(I’ve already expand this.)

What do I want to share in my final presentation?

1.      I want to share the stories that happens between me and the cats.

In the books I read before, the authors usually wrote about the cats’ emotion by his or her imagination to attract the readers. I think I can do my project in that way, too.

Of course authors were all mention about their own feelings and wrote sincerely, that’s important, too. And don’t forget the interaction!

2.      The conversations between the couple who have fed these cats for fourteen years.

I think I’m not going to interview them formally, just talk to them like chatting with a friend. What we talk about is always about cats, so I think I don’t need to “interview” them. I post some conversations between as in the posts before, I don’t know if they are ok.

Where are the cats?

In the park near my house.

There are about six to seven cats in the park, every cats has its own name( named by the mother of cats.)and its own personality.

How do I do this topic?

I will go see these cats in the park everyday, and record what I see. And sometimes I will talk to the couple and write down what we talked about. Of course I have read some books to help me describe these cats funnier.

I think I would let some audience erase the dad memories of cats by my speech. Every time when I go to the park, some strangers would tell me not approach these cats because they are dirty or they have hydrophobia(狂犬病). But actually they are not that dirty(at least you won’t get sick if you wash your hands)and they don’t have hydrophobia.(or I would be the first person who dead in hydrophobia)

Topic: cats

Main idea: I not quite sure about the main idea, I think what I want to express how cute these cats are, please don’t hurt them.

Outline:

1.      強強’s story(I post it on the blogger, and Miss You told me it will be a good beginning.)

2.      Introduce these cats and shows where they like to hide in the park. (Each of them like to hide in different places.)

3.      Share the stories and the conversations.

(Introduce TNR. T=trap, N=neuter, R=return. TNR=love street cats )

4.      My conclusion(Try to be nice to them.)

The reason why I love cats

I think the biggest reason that I love cats is their personality.

Many people said that cats are mysterious and arrogant so they don’t like cats.

But in my opinion, this is the most attractive speciality of cats is their unfriendly.

Let’s talk about my personality first. I like to get alone and become friends with people, but I don’t want to be friends with EVERYONE.

If I pay more attention to someone, I hope he or she can also treat me better than others. For example, I don’t want my boyfriend to  Maybe, I want to be different form others in my mind haha.

Cats just fit in with my requirement. If you want to be friend of a cat, you have to spend time on him or her, once he or she is willing to intimate you, he or she will be very nice to you but ignore others. That made me feel proud of myself.

Topic

Why I choose this topic?

Because I love cats.

What do I want to share in my final presentation?

1.      I want to share the stories that happens between me and the cats.

2.      The conversations between the couple who have fed these cats for fourteen years.

Where are the cats?

In the park near my house.

How do I do this topic?

I will go see these cats in the park everyday, and record what I see. And sometimes I will talk to the couple and write down what we talked about. Of course I have read some books to help me describe these cats funnier.

Topic: cats

Main idea: I not quite sure about the main idea, I think what I want to express how cute these cats are, please don’t hurt them.

Outline:

1.      強強’s story(I post it on the blogger, and Miss You told me it will be a good beginning.)

2.      Introduce these cats and shows where they like to hide in the park. (Each of them like to hide in different places.)

3.      Share the stories and the conversations.

4.      My conclusion(Try to be nice to them.)

Beware of cats!

 Today is a sorrowful day.

小熊 has gone to see his maker last night, at 6:00 p.m, because of a car accident.
We are all sad, but 大福 is the saddest.

Mother of the cats said it was 大福 that bring 小熊 here. They are best friend.
小熊 used to sleep on 大福's belly when he was still alive.
大福 looks really absent-minded, our hearts bleed for him.
If cats had tears, I think he would have cried him out.

How can I describe the feeling?
Yesterday, I went to see them at about 5:45 p.m., and he was hit by a car at about 6:00 p.m.
Just 15 minutes, then he left us, forever.
Things could change in every minute.
There's a saying," Never is too old to learn.", but it might be too late for you to give your love to your beloved one.
I think I should express my love to those who love me, they could leave anytime.

I drew a picture to remember him.
Thank you for teach me such a meaningful lesson.

 Rest In Peace.
You are the angle in our hearts.

I have browse a some of theses books and I want to share something with you.

島嶼街貓日記
In the beginning, she wrote about her pet cats.
When she wrote that her cat died, I can't stop crying.
"這個世界甚麼都可以忍，只有死亡不能忍。但，貓妹真的強行隱忍，在我期末忙亂失序的生活中，貓妹一息尚存，淡漠的迎接朝陽，目送黃昏，直到課程結束的那個周末，我微微詫異貓妹的神情有別往日，我還特意為她拍了一幀照片。事隔多年，我才知道，那種神情在人類世界我們稱之為彌留。"
<節錄自--徐鈺晶 島嶼街貓手記>

I think the author considers theses cats as her family, so that she could write such touching words to record her cats death.
Rest in peace.

再見小貓，謝謝你

<本圖自--李龍漢 再見小貓謝謝你>

There's a map in the book, I think it's quite interesting and unique.
Maybe I could draw one, too.
But I think I can only draw the cats in the park... .


His name is 大福 because the mother of cats said he looks like strawberry大福...(o｀з’*)
A little girl is playing with him.